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Becky For Nick by *Green-Chaos:iconGreen-Chaos:

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©2009 *Green-Chaos
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My brother's girlfriend, Becky~

She's really pretty and she seems nice. (Even though I've never really gotten the chance to talk with her....)

He asked me to draw this so that he could give this to her as a present along with a red rose with ribbon. >w<





Isn't my brothah a romantic?!
:iconblushingplz:

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*whateverjulie May 23, 2009, 11:30:06 AM
okies... to start i love :love: her hair, amazing on the detail and texture, :clap: really great! the only problem i see in the hair is where the eye is, i think you should have made it go over the eye... ^^; i just think it would have made it look more anime!

the face is good i really like the eyes! though there does seem to be something off about them...(maybe) the eyes are to far apart, i think the face has no real depth so it makes it feel like they are far apart... ^^;

i love the "choker" very cute! but it might look more "life like anime" if you gave it a little wrinkle or made it just a tiny bit loose... ^^;

her shoulder seems a bit pointy... ^^; but it still looks good :clap: ... her head seems to big for her neck (even for anime) i suggest next time you make a anime pic, try to make her head just a tiny bit shorter and making her neck a bit thicker! =)

note = try to define the face details... such as, the nose, and the eyes, make a few lines near the eyes for depth... but the mouth is great! :clap:
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*RaiEatsBabies May 23, 2009, 12:14:21 PM
HEY BECKY YOU SO FINE,
YOU SO FINE I WANT YOU MINE,
HEY BECKY,
HEY HEY,
HEY BECKY.
lolz

yaya updates! :heart:

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*Oro13Immortal May 23, 2009, 5:02:19 PM
very nice^^

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*Green-Chaos May 23, 2009, 5:55:29 PM
YAY UPDATES

AND THERE'S MORE WHERE THIS COMES FROM
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*Oro13Immortal May 25, 2009, 4:41:38 AM
you're welcome^^

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clubs I'm in or want to be in are here:
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